The Walkie Talkie Teddy

Last year, a Y6 pupil from Grenoside Primary School produced this response to the 2003 Shorter Writing Task:-

The Walkie-Talkie Teddy

Have you got kids? Are they constantly bored? Well have no fear for the Walkie Talkie Teddy is here! The most action packed teddy around.

The Walkie Talkie Teddy has over four amazing features. Have you ever seen a teddy that wears waterproofs and can be used in the bath? A teddy that can give hugs on no batteries! A teddy that talks when you press his stomach and has over seven catchphrases? A teddy that can talk when wound up? You're all probably wondering why we haven't called him SuperTeddy! But it gets better. He's unbreakable and wouldn't even break if you threw him off the top of Ben Nevis.

This is what one mother said after her kids tried out the Walkiew Talkie Teddy for a week - "It was absolutely stress-free. Fort once I could actually make dinner without having to keep checking on the children all the time!"

Does that sound like a happy customer to you? I think so! The Walkie-Talkie Teddy is available in toy stores all over the world - suchy as ToysRUs, Woolworths, Toy Factory, Toy World and many more. If you have any questiuons about The Walkie Talkie Teddy then write to us at 9 Liverpool St, London, PO Box 16.

So don't forget to buy The Walkie Talkie Teddy if you ever come across it... and give your child a Walkie-Talkie smile!

Well done to Emily B. from Grenoside Primary! This piece is lively. Emily clearly understood the task and showed a real awareness of the audience she was writing for. It genuinely sounds like a radio ad. Seven out of eight marks for Composition and Effect and three out of four marks for Structure and Organisation. Smashing!